What I do not like about the story
1) The end of this story. It is very generously to make others happy, but to be whole life with empty eyes is not a deal.
2) There are a lot of people with various diseases in the story.
3) Information about the army takes a lot of pages. I am a girl!
What I like about the story
1) I like the main idea. Perhaps, we should understand that true happiness is in the happiness of our special people. I think it is a debatable question.
2) This story makes me think about the mail people’s values.
3) The language is clear enough.
4) I have learned what about boys are thinking in some situations.
That's a good analyses and carefully thought over.
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It is very generously>should use adj after link verbs such as to be
mail people’s values> is it main or male?
I have learned what (about) boys are thinking about in some situations >wrong word order